NoWriMo ended a month ago. We spent December recovering from all the sanity we just lost; a month of thankfulness and joy for all the things we no longer have to do, like writing 1667 words per day and pulling out hair.
But, guess what? It’s January, and that means it’s time to sit back down at the desk and read your draft over again before making those first few edits.
WAIT BUT FIRST I HAVE NEWS
Annie Cate – only one of my best friends in the ENTIRE PLANET – is launching her own blog. Today. And this is like the cutest blog in the history of blogs I’m not kidding.
Not to mention, she’s multi-talented and writes both fiction and nonfiction like it’s easy and I can’t understand how she does it??
SO GO VISIT ANNIE CATE ANDERSON ❤
And now, back to the post. 🙂
Do you wanna know how I feel about my NaNo drafts?
They’re trash – absolute garbage. If you could read them, you’d think a chimp sat at the keyboard and hit the keys until a string of actual words came out. And you’d also think that I enjoy making my characters cry and fail at relationships.
Well, admittedly, I do. They cry/fail a lot.
In short (since I’m one typo away from a full-on rant) this draft is worse than stepping on a stray LEGO piece. And obviously I do this a lot so I should know.
But you know the awesome thing about it?
A large part of NaNoWriMo is caging that monster called the ‘inner editor.’ We spend the first week (or more) trying desperately to stop editing yesterday’s work.
Wait for it… this is the good part!…
Now that you’re editing, it’s okay to have that stinking inner editor from first draft days. In fact, it’s great! Buy it a coffee or something and welcome it in.
What exactly is editing?
Editing is simple. All you have to do is make the book better.
Of course, this includes (but is not limited to): adding words, removing words, copy/pasting words, resolving unfinished storylines, swapping incorrect words for their proper substitutes, fixing dialogue to match personality, fixing plot holes, making sure paragraphs aren’t too long, tuning up or down drama, comedy, or horror, splitting lengthy sentences, adding and removing scenes, renaming things and people, checking for bad grammar, dealing with spellcheck that can’t seem to get your MC’s name correct, research, research, research, more research, and weeding through typos.
…I never said editing was easy.
How do I get started?
The first time you edit is going to be hard. Hard. After NaNoWriMo, you’re probably at least a bit tired of your novel and want to leave it be. But these are the Now What months – better to get it done now with everybody else than by yourself!
The Marco edit is the big one that everybody dreads, that they talk about in all those writing books. I can’t tell you whether it’s easier or harder than it seems – that depends on your motivation and general speed in getting things done.
The second draft requires a lot of cut & paste, rewriting, deleting, and patience. I recommend this post by Go Teen Writers as a guide.
What if I’ve already fixed the really bad stuff?
Congrats for being ahead of the game! But, alas, my friend. It’s time for Micro Editing.
Micro editing is where you aren’t focusing on the story as a whole, and rather the smaller details. Like, how your character’s dialogue reflects his personality. Or, what word you should use in place of ‘suddenly.’ Simple things.
But, just because you are in stage two of editing doesn’t mean you’re out of the woods. Micro editing may have problems easier to fix, but there are a lot of them. Grammar alone may take a whole draft (I hope this doesn’t scare anybody!)
Once again, Go Teen Writers has a great guide here.
Why should I edit anyway?
Ok, this is more of a personal choice than anything else. You’re definitely not required to edit. You can just keep your draft for yourself and that’s just fine. The problem is, if you stop at the first draft with intentions of someday editing, it’s likely you’re going to forget about editing it down the line while another plot bunny takes over.
See? Cute, but not good for plot bunny #1 in the background.
Besides, after a while you’re bored with the idea. So you totally abandon poor little bunny #1 and wander off to find the next one.
Please don’t leave the bunny. The world needs your bunny.
I don’t know about y’all, but I am absolutely hooped to edit Skybound this month! I’ve been writing the end of it the past few weeks and I’m still not done, but I’ll be taking the rest of January to finish Marco edits. Then, February will bring my personal favorite, Micro!!
Isn’t it weird to think that the novels that didn’t even exist in September are going to be through 3 drafts by March?! That’s half a year!
*gasp* Do you know what that means?
WE COULD WRITE FOUR BOOKS BEFORE STAR WARS 9 COMES OUT!!
Tell me how your novel is going! What’s it about? Have you begun editing yet? Or are you still finishing up draft 1?
BTW aren’t those bunnies the cutest things ever??? 😀